A fundraising coordinator at a children's charity asked Claude for two versions of an email appeal to long-standing supporters. Version one is 600 words of polished storytelling; version two is 200 words with one story and a clear request to donate. The charity's own research shows most of these supporters read emails on their phones and stop after the first screen. How should she choose between the versions?
- AJudge both against how supporters read on phones, pick the one that lands its ask on the first screen, then edit it. Correct
- BChoose version one, because the longer and more polished draft shows supporters more of the charity's work.
- CAsk Claude which version it rates more highly and send that one, since it wrote both drafts for this audience.
- DMerge both versions so the email keeps all of the storytelling and also ends with a clear request to donate.
Why A is correct: This compares the alternatives against the stated audience need: reading on phones and stopping after one screen. The shorter version fits that need, and editing it afterwards refines the chosen draft rather than starting again.
Why B is wrong: A richer draft looks like the stronger piece of writing. It is wrong because these supporters stop after the first screen, so most of the storytelling and the request to donate would go unread.
Why C is wrong: Asking the author for a view feels efficient. It is wrong because Claude's preference is not evidence about how these supporters read, and the charity already holds that evidence in its own research.
Why D is wrong: Combining the best parts sounds like a fair compromise. It is wrong because the merged email is even longer, so the request at the end falls well below the first screen that supporters actually read.